Am nevoie de aceasta traducere in engleza...maine ma asculta din acest text( in engleza) si vreau sa stiu cat de corect l-am tradus ( vreau sa ma verific).

Question

Azi a fost o zi grea pentru mine. Doi agresori au venit si mi-au furat sandvisurile cu branza si au zis ironic  sa pun mai multa sare data viitoare.
Cand au sosit prietenii mei, eu plangeam, iar ei au incercat sa ma consoleze.
Apoi toti ne-am gandit sa incepem o campanie impotriva tuturor agresorilor din scoala.

Answer 1

Today was a hard day for me. Two bullies came and stole my cheese sandwiches and said ironically that I should use more salt next time. When my friends arrived, I was crying, and they tried to console me. Then we all thought to start a campaign against all school bullies.

Answer 2

Ai tradus bine!

Answer 3

Today was a tough day for me. Two assailants came and stole my cheese sandwiches and said ironically to put more salt next time.When my friends arrived, I cried, and they tried to console me.Then we all thought we would start a campaign against all perpetrators of school.

Answer 4

In loc de ironically as fi zis mockingly in prima traducere, in rest spun si eu ca textul e bine tradus.

Answer 5

io la scumpik as avea de corectat 'i cried' ala(actiunea era in desfasurare in momentul sosirii lor),we should,must,need sau ought to merg la fel de bine in locul lui would(nu stiu sa  zic daca e kiar gresit) si ..perpetratrators ala de unde l-ai scos???
   in fine,daca nu stiu eu nu inseamna ca nu exista..
dar OF  school?,nu in sau macar (all) schools ?
ee..bine